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Finally! It's time to meet Justin Bieber, Luke (his best friend) completely psyched and ready to go! Go and tickle him that is! Luke enter his dressing room and sit down, the guard said it would only be a minute. A couple minutes later, the door opens and in comes Justin!
"Hey," He says, sitting down beside you. "So you're the one who one the contest. What do you want to do? I can't believe they pick my best friend in the whole world"
"TICKLE YOU!" Luke thinks, but Luke keeps his cool, suggesting that you go back to his place.
He agrees quickly, and he head to the limo and in a short while you're at his house.

it's an awesome place and there are lots to do, but what's going to let you tickle him?

"How 'bout a video game," You suggest and he agrees.
He leads you to a huge TV and you start playing, and, thinking ahead, you end up losing on purpose. After a couple of games Luke suggest make this interesting. And again he agrees, grinning as tell him that whoever wins gets to make the other person do whatever they want, within reason of course.
"Yeah! And I'm gonna win!" He exclaims, starting a new game.
Of course, you've been holding back and within no time, you've won!
"Alright... what do you want me to do?" He asks, a little bummed, but still excited.

Luke- "Let me tie you up," Luke said

He looks shocked, but after a couple seconds he agrees, and leads you back into another room.

There, you find a big chair, and a couch, about as long as he is.

Luke thinks….. And decide to have him...

"Alright then, lay on the couch," Luke said. "And give me some rope."

He grins sheepishly and does as you say.

"Now, stretch your arms to the top of the couch," Luke orders him, grinning.

He does so, and Luke can tell he's slightly nervous, but he doesn't jerk away as you tie his hands to the arm of the couch.

Then he does the same thing to his feet.

Stretched out, and restrained you grin as you rest your hand on his stomach.

"So Justin," Luke start. "Are you... ticklish?"

His eyes widen and he starts to pull on the ropes, but he can't get free.

"No! Please!" He shouts. "Don't tickle me! I won't be able to take it!"

Luke grins as he lifts up his shirt, tucking it behind his head.

Luke grins even more as he giggles from even that.

"I think I'll start up here!" You exclaim as you drag your fingers across Justin's belly.

"Nooohohohohohoho Staaaahahahahahahap!" He cries, trying feverishly to move away.

"No way Justin!" Luke yells. "Now it's time for your armpits!"

Luke stop suddenly, placing your finger lightly at his waist band and drag them up his stomach and chest as he giggles, in fear of your attack.

Finally, he reach his pits, which only have a few puffs of brown hair and slowly run your fingers over them.

"Aaahahahahahahahaha! Nooooohohohohohohohoho! Pleeeeeeeheheheheheheahahahahahahase!"

He giggles, trying desperately to protect his sensitive pits.

But you're not even warmed up yet!

You scribble your fingers around his underarms as fast as you can, digging into the spot right under them, as you know from experience are very ticklish.

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA H!

PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE HEHEHEASE!

STAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAP TICKLING AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!"

He cries, jerking around in his bonds.

"Stop, tickling?" Luke asks. "But I haven't even tickled your... "I haven't even tickled your feet yet!" he said, walking down to the end of the couch.

"NO! NOT MY FEET! PLEASE! THEY'RE MY MOST TICKLISH SPOT! PLEASE! NOT THERE! PLEASE!"

He cries, trying to pull away as he puts his hands on Justin's sneakered feet.

"Umm... let me think about it," Luke reply. "Nope!"

Luke pull of his shoe to reveal a size 7 black-socked foot.

Out of curiosity, you run a finger down his sole and watch in fascination as he laughs and jumps.

"Wow, Justin," he say. "You're feet really ARE ticklish!"

"Yeah..." He replies, blushing. "Now that you know, can you not tickle them?

"Nope!" Luke replies evilly.

Luke pull off his other shoe and in no time flat he have two INSANELY ticklish feet on his hands, or under his tickling fingers, as the case may be.

Luke start off with his heel, tickling, both the right and the left as he giggles and squirms.

"Aahahahahahahaha! Nooohohohohohohot the feeeeehehehehehehet!" He cries as Luke continue up his arch.

They seem to be even more ticklish as Luke runs his fingers up his soft arches he arches his back and laughs at the top of his lungs.

Finally Luke reach the balls of his feet, which aren't as ticklish as his arches, but still manage to get a few giggles.

And then, Luke reaches his toes.

Even under the protection of his black wool socks, Justin screams with laughter as Luke tickled the spot right under his toes.

Luke tickle the tops of his toes and he laughs more, though underneath seems to get a better reaction And]tickle more and more, listening to his wonderful laughter.

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

STAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAP! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEASE!

JUST STAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAP! I CAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAN'T!

TAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAKE IT! STAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAP TICKLING MY

FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE HEHEHEHEHEHEET!"

He laughs, shaking on the couch as luke tickle him.

Finally Luke stop, but luke isn't done yet, he decided to... luke smirk evilly as you reach down and slide the young pop stars last line of protection of his feet.

Luke look down at the two soft, pale feet in front of Luke can't help but wonder if these aren't the most ticklish-looking feet the world's ever seen!

"Please!" Justin cries. "No more! Not my bare feet! I'll die! PLEASE!"

Luke grins again, but says nothing as he rakes his fingers up and down his soft soles.

Justin laughs and laughs, jerking back and forth as you tickle his most sensitive spot.

Finally, Luke want to see what he's really made of, so using one hand to pull Justin's toes back, Luke dig his fingers into the undersides of his helpless toes.

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO HOHOHOHO!

PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEASE! STAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAP!

JUST STAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAP! I CAHAHAHAHAHAN'T

TAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAKE IT! PLEEEEEEEEHEHEHEHEHEHEASE!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO MOOOOOOOOOOOOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHORE!"

He screams, laughing his head off till his face turns red. Luke said let's tickle somewhere else!

Justin- No! Please! Stop tickling!
justin gets tickled
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samyrowski Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Student
Very tiny feet Justin has, doenst he??
Nice story!!
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MMPRBlueRanger1993 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
yes he does lol so did like the story then ?
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samyrowski Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Student
Yes. Kept it simple but very efficient.
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MMPRBlueRanger1993 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thankies !
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Theodor14 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
is this story real ??
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MMPRBlueRanger1993 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
nope totally not real !
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QuickSilverShadow Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hope you and [link] are the same person because it's the same story.
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MMPRBlueRanger1993 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yup the same person lol
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QuickSilverShadow Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ok just makn sure... cuz I was gona acuse u of stealing but then I was like, "Well, in classic me fashion, he would be wrong and I'd be horribly wrong... okay, let's revise that," so yeah. Thank you for the favorites :)
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MMPRBlueRanger1993 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
np
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QuickSilverShadow Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesumness
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kidnappedfeet Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012
wish i could do that
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MMPRBlueRanger1993 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
im glad you liked the story !
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theolivethief14 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That was so random XD But I can totally imagine somebody tickling Justin Bieber!! He would be so ticklish too XD Funny!
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MMPRBlueRanger1993 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks for the lama badge and the fav ! ithought he would be ticklish lol
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theolivethief14 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! ^^
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MMPRBlueRanger1993 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
im glad you enjoy my story !
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justinscar1234 Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
cute story
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MMPRBlueRanger1993 Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks i glad you like it !
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intercoursesex Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
wow and a story for me please
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MMPRBlueRanger1993 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
im glad that you like it lol
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intercoursesex Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012
ur welcomed so are u eloible for it can tell me if ur busy or not thanks
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MMPRBlueRanger1993 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i am busy probably to june but any time after that and it fine
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luigilover04 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012
Very nice!:D can you do a story for me?!:)
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MMPRBlueRanger1993 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks but i actually im taking in requests right now. but maybe if you send me a message later in about june the maybe i be ready then .
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luigilover04 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012
Kk:)
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yaoinut17 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011  Student Artist
okay, that was very interesting!

maybe the guard at the beginning is his bodyguard? lots of stars have those.

the grammar needs some work, but overall I thought it was very funny! ROFL!!!
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MMPRBlueRanger1993 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
yeah i forgot to edit it haha sorry about the grammar lol. im glad you like it tho !
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yaoinut17 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Student Artist
yep, keep it up!!
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MMPRBlueRanger1993 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thanks for the advice !
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yaoinut17 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Student Artist
your welcome!!
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MMPRBlueRanger1993 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
i really helps out !
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yaoinut17 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Student Artist
yeppers, you do!!
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MMPRBlueRanger1993 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thanks !
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BigBlueFeather Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Not bad. There are some problems grammatically and just in general - why is there a guard at the beginning? Is Biebs in jail? lol

Keep writing, maybe find someone to beta read it for you before you submit it, to catch anything you might miss. :)
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MMPRBlueRanger1993 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thaNKS for the advice lol i for got to take out the guard thing lol. Biebs isnt in jail either its more of contest that his friend won
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BigBlueFeather Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah that was a little unrealistic too - if they're friends why can't they just be chilling one time? :P
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MMPRBlueRanger1993 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
because justin is always on tour
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BigBlueFeather Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So write that. ;)

Also the switching between "Luke does this and that." to "You do this and that." isn't good. Pick a PoV and stick with it.
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MMPRBlueRanger1993 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
alright thanks for the advice !
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BigBlueFeather Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Anytime! :)
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MMPRBlueRanger1993 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
lol
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